Daniel is thirty-three when he enters a near Cascais. Cocaine and pills have controlled his life for years. The doctor explains that he is but must not leave during the first few days. Daniel while watching the open door.
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On the first morning, Daniel and a group of strangers sit on in a circle. Everyone breathes together, talks about energy, and holds . Daniel thinks it is all nonsense. When the leader a break, Daniel stands, crosses the open doorway, and .
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The wind pushes Daniel along the for hours until he reaches Guincho beach. Among black rocks, he finds a woman sitting in the Atlantic. He took his last pill shortly before arriving at the clinic. The pill is still affecting him, and makes him unsure whether she is real. He decides she must be a . That would explain her very .
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The woman, who appears to be about thirty, as Inês, she in the water. Daniel asks whether she is cold and why she will not come out. ‘Not today,’ she replies with a small smile. It seems like a he does not yet understand. That makes him want to stay longer.
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The next morning, the drug's effect has gone, but Inês is still there. Daniel brings two cups of coffee to the beach. They discuss , fear, and decisions that seem at night but the next morning. Daniel notices he does not need to her. When she laughs, he feels light for the first time in months.
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Eventually, Daniel describes his and admits that he the clinic on his first day. Inês listens carefully, without showing or treating him as . ‘I am not here to save you,’ she says. ‘You decide whether to return.’ Her honesty affects him more than anything he heard at the clinic on his first morning.
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On the third day, darken the sky. Daniel goes into the water only up to his knees because Inês has clearly warned him about the . She her hand. When their fingers touch, a large silver shape moves through the , far too fast to be human legs.
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During the , a huge wave rises before them. It crashes down and pulls the water back. Daniel that Inês has no legs. Below her waist, there is a long silver tail. Its dark move through the white water. Inês is not a woman sitting in the sea . She is a .
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Act I complete
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